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I have enjoyed developing this article and would like a peer review with a focus on FAC preparation. Looking forward to your comments.

Thanks, Metalicat (talk) 22:35, 31 March 2026 (UTC)[reply]

RoySmith

I ran Citation verifier on this. The results are attached below. I have not done a deep dive into this, but I suggest you take a look at all the entries noted “partial” or “not supported” to see if there are any actual problems there. RoySmith (talk) 21:00, 12 April 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • Most of the images are impossible to read at the default display size. On my desktop, they’re fine when clicked on so they are displayed at a larger size, but on my phone, they’re not comprehensible at all. See MOS:TEXTASIMAGES.
  • Amy Adler has argued that from 2007 onwards I don’t know if there’s a specific MOS section that talks about this, but it’s conventional to introduce people with a short description of who they are, to help the reader put the person’s comments in the proper context, i.e. “Law professor Amy Adler”.
  • algorithm amplified emotionally charged, out-group hostile political content What does out-group” mean?
  • Algorithmic ranking structures visibility around engagement and audience retention The first time I read this, I interpreted “structures” as a noun, leading to much confusion over the rest of the sentence. Perhaps rephrase this?
  • You have a few places where entire paragraphs are cited to clusters of 3, 4 or even 5 references. I’m not a fan of that since it makes it difficult for a reader to figure out what facts came from which sources. I recommend breaking those up and providing more targeted citations.
  • These concerns have informed legislative activity. KOSA KOSA was first mentioned a long time ago, it might be worth re-introducing it here.
  • In the United Kingdom, Ofcom published … Tell the reader what Ofcom is.
  • The DSA … requires very large online platforms to assess What is a “very large online platform”?
  • The Act’s categorisation framework I think it’s OK to say “The Act” in the same paragraph where you defined it, in a new paragraph, I’d spell it out the first time.
  • China was the first country to enact legislation specifically targeting algorithmic recommendation systems. Be careful of “first” claims. They often turn out to be wrong, despite a RS which says so. I prefer to hedge a little with “believed to be first”, “claimed to be first”, etc.
  • Jian Xu has argued Another person who needs introducing.

Overall, I think this is pretty good. The prose is well-written and the sources look solid. My biggest complaint is the images, which really do need to be improved.


Thanks for the review RoySmith. I’m away working at the moment, but will get on this when I’m back next week. Metalicat (talk) 10:26, 14 April 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Drive by comment from Noleander

  • The very first sentence is: “Algorithmic amplification is the process by which automated ranking and recommendation systems on digital platforms increase the visibility of certain content beyond its initial audience.” The link to Recommender system is critical (it establishes the ecosystem within which algorithmic amplification happens) but the link is currently hidden behind the word “recommendation”. I think readers will want the noun “Recommender system” clearly stated, defined, & linked in the first couple of sentences. At a minimum consider expanding the wikilink to include the word “system”.
  • I suggest that the lead section contain a couple of concrete examples of these algorithms such as Tik toks feed or Twitter/X feed or Facebook feeds. Without concrete, familiar examples like those, most readers will tune out immediately and exit the article. Noleander (talk) 02:49, 16 April 2026 (UTC)[reply]